Sunday, December 6, 2020

Practice Writing and Sharing like an Oreo

 I read a short article from TheWritePractice.com this morning by Joe Bunting. He and I and thousands of others swear by the practice of writing every day to become better and better. Writing itself is the best practice. We speak 125 words a minute so imagine what you could create in only 15 minutes a day if you don't filter yourself. That's right, just write creatively and honestly and don't waste time editing as you go. That can come later.

   Here are Joe's steps on practicing with my additions:
1. Find paper and pen, a PC/laptop/phone, a journal etc., to write in/on. If you can, find a quiet spot but not absolutely necessary.
2. Set a time limit. 
   If you are crunched for time set a 15-minute egg timer or your watch.
3. Write. 
   It could be a memory, a feeling, a story, idea, your novel, poem, or memoir. regardless, write. Let the words flow from your thoughts and feelings. But it's important to reset your eyes like the 20/20 rule says - write 20 minutes then break for 20 seconds. Get up and walk away, stretch, get coffee or tea etc. You don't want white-screen fatigue.
4. Share what you've written for feedback. 
   This is where I disagree with Joe a bit. To share is good advice, and for first time writers, just do it. Everyone knows drafts aren't perfect. Author Anne Lamott says they're "shitty." But for experienced writers, we like to at least edit and polish the piece a little before we share it. Up to you. Either way Share.
   Writing groups found online or locally are a great way to share if you don't have what Stephen King calls "a beta reader." This is someone you trust to give you honest feedback. His wife Tabitha and friends do it for his works. Writing, poetry, and writing critique groups can be searched for on MeetUp.com for example, or your library. All are generally helpful and supportive.
5. Give feedback to other writers or poets. 
   It's true that we don't see the log in our own eyes and rarely recognize all our mistakes or chances for improved writing. Oh, but when we hear others read theirs, Boy, what doesn't sound right stands out. More than that, hearing and reading others' pieces, like reading or listening to books themselves, helps us improve. Stephen King in his memoir and writing textbook On Writing says we should read more than we write. This is where a Creative Writers Group, Poetry Group, or similar group will help us. Plus we meet other writers and poets and learn their tips and advice, as well as what we shouldn't do. And, we make friends.
   A good way to give feedback is to follow, as Joe says, "the Oreo method." First give positive feedback - what you liked. Second, be constructive, what wasn't clear or could be improved, and always give specifics. Third, in closing, your comments should always be positive and encouraging. The Oreo mnemonic is - positive/ constructive/ positive. In this example the Oreo is icing/cookie/icing - even yummier.
   I've facilitated, shared, and listened in Creative Writers Groups almost every Monday and Tuesday afternoon for years and they have improved my writing 100% with more to achieve. Now we are on Zoom due to Covid restrictions and it has not hampered us. New members are welcome and you can contact me at 1950ablia@gmail.com if interested. Writing groups are non-threatening, supportive, and encouraging, or should be, and friendship is guaranteed.
   So write and share sooner rather than later.
Best and be safe,
Rodney

   

Wednesday, December 2, 2020

New book coming

 Hi There, I haven't been posting for months since devoting all my time to living around Covid and rewriting my bipolar memoir, Episodes. I'm almost done extensive revisions and improvements and expect to publish by February 2021 (actually July 2021). The new version is completely revised as you can tell by the new title, Coffee, Cigarettes, Death & Mania.

Cof, Cigs, Death & Mania will be shorter and more concise, more action and dialogue packed, but will still focus on main themes of Yes, millions of people are bipolar, There is help, and There is hope for normal life, family, and work between episodes. Also, how caregivers can weather the storms and be better prepared.

I've also been busy handling my editing, formatting, polishing, and publishing business, ABLiA Media, to help writers in any genre achieve their best work. Recently I helped writer Marion Pollack edit, format, and publish on Amazon her hilarious memoir Grandma Tell Us a Story. Other works I have similarly helped with are The Man Who Never Slept by Robert Quinn, Unbalanced Justice by Samuel L Naro, and two books by Dr.  Michael P. Riccards, A Hero of My Own Life and some of his Italian Grandpa stories. I have helped more than a dozen writers publish with tips, editing, format suggestions, grammar assistance, publishing, and critiques.

I am very active with both the Hamilton and Lawrence NJ Creative Writers Groups, critique and encouragement groups for writers who share their work and receive critical feedback. I started the Hamilton Group in 2011. Both groups meet weekly and both are listed on MeetUp.com. We meet on Zoom now, and if interested in joining for free, email me at rodwriter80@gmail.com and I will connect you up. Participating in both groups weekly since 2011, and others, I have listened to, critiqued, and offered suggestion and tips for improvement on over 3,000 pieces from over 100 writers and poets.

This Blog, Write with Authority, will focus on my observations, tips, and highlights from others on how to improve one's writings and poems, prose and poetry. As a State of New Jersey technical writer for 30 years, and an author since 2013, I have the experience and life knowledge to help you do your best, to publish, and to succeed. My second published book in 2018 was Solving the World's Titanic Struggles, a compendium of 100 short essays on current topics and questions, with a spiritual base of solutions. Solving is available on Amazon.

A poetry tip for example: Use enjambment. That is the way you end the line, with what word or words, and move to the next. Take "The deer came down from the mountain."  Boring.

What if it were:

The deer came

d

  o

    w

       n

from the mountain.

See? Very different. Unique, impactful. Leaves an impression.

So hope to see you more often on these pages as I create more posts for your consideration.

Best,

Rodney Richards